Question

14．假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Jim想了解你家鄉(xiāng)文化遺產(chǎn)（heritage）保護的情況．請你就文化遺產(chǎn)的保護現(xiàn)狀、存在的問題及你的希望給他寫一封信．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右：
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
How are things going？I'm glad you are interested in our cultural heritage protection．
Great progress has been made in the past few years．Every year a lot of efforts are made and much money is spent researching and protecting it．（高分句型一） People are more aware of the importance of protecting the cultural heritage．（高分句型二）
However，we are faced with greaterchallenges in protecting our culturalrlics nowadays because they have to make way for many new buildings．Even worse，a largenumber of historic spots have already been destroyed，which worries us a lot．（高分句型三）
I think more steps should be taken to protect our cultural heritage．And I hopethe whole society will take an active part．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的美國朋友Jim想了解你家鄉(xiāng)文化遺產(chǎn)（heritage）保護的情況．請你就文化遺產(chǎn)的保護現(xiàn)狀、存在的問題及你的希望給他寫一封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息2、要在適當(dāng)?shù)姆秶鷥?nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be interested in 對…感興趣；make progress取得進步；cultural heritage文化遺產(chǎn)；however然而；even worse更糟的是；take an active part積極參加
Every year a lot of efforts are made and much money is spent researching and protecting it．（高分句型一）
People are more aware of the importance of protecting the cultural heritage．（高分句型二）
Even worse，a large number of historic spots have already been destroyed，which worries us a lot．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jim，
        How are things going？I'm glad you are interested in our cultural heritage protection．
        Great progress has been made in the past few years．Every year a lot of efforts are made and much money is spent researching and protecting it．（高分句型一） People are more aware of the importance of protecting the cultural heritage．（高分句型二）
        However，we are faced with greater challenges in protecting our cultural rlics nowadays because they have to make way for many new buildings．Even worse，a large number of historic spots have already been destroyed，which worries us a lot．（高分句型三）
        I think more steps should be taken to protect our cultural heritage．And I hope the whole society will take an active part．
                                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．