現(xiàn)今孩子迷戀電腦、網(wǎng)絡的現(xiàn)象越來越嚴重,有的孩子甚至足不出戶,如何教育引導孩子,成為人們的熱點話題。請閱讀下面的漫畫,按要求用英文寫一篇短文。
內(nèi)容要求:
1.描述漫畫內(nèi)容;
2.分析漫畫所揭示的問題;
3.提出你的看法。
注意:
1.短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);
2.考生可適當發(fā)揮,使文章內(nèi)容充實、連貫;
3.詞數(shù)120左右;
4.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。
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One possible version:
This picture presents to us a scene in which a family of three are walking on a country road. The father is holding a long pole with a computer tied to the end. The son is chasing the computer happily.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that some children are so addicted to the Internet that they tend to lock themselves indoors on weekends, playing computer games or surfing the Internet. Consequently, they are becoming more and more reluctant to communicate with their peers.
Personally, the more time children spend on computers, the more physical and mental problems they well suffer from. To rid children of their addiction to the Internet, parents should not only guide them in a proper way but also spare more time to stay with them, such as going out and visiting relatives. Only in this way can they resist the temptation of the Internet and lead a normal life.
解析根據(jù)提示可知這是畫圖式作文。圖畫式作文有個典型“三段式”寫法。即在第一段描寫圖畫,第二段結(jié)合現(xiàn)實生活分析圖畫的含義,第三段表達個人觀點,進行個人總結(jié)。因為高考閱卷時間緊張,閱卷老師往往在極短的時間就瀏覽完文章,所以大家如果能夠保證范文章結(jié)構(gòu)銜接緊湊,緊扣題目要求,層次分明的話,往往也不難拿高分。在文章的第一段,作者簡單直接用一個限制性定語從句描述圖畫This picture presents to us a scene,簡潔自然。第二段由一個長句和一個短句組成,第一句是根據(jù)圖畫的內(nèi)容然后描述實際生活現(xiàn)象It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that some children are so addicted to the Internet that they tend to lock themselves indoors on weekends,其中的同位語從句用的恰到好處。最后一段以Personally開始,一個單詞就告訴閱卷老師作者的寫作意圖是歸納總結(jié)。這一點也是值得學習的。
【亮點說明】
這篇范文是典型的三段式作文。其結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,文章的段首句都是主題句,然后用幾句話分層次展開,簡單分析,最后一段按照出題者的要求表明了自己對圖畫所展示的問題的看法。
這樣的文章在高考中是有很大的優(yōu)勢的。老師閱卷是往往沒有時間細看每一句,幾秒鐘就掃視完全篇,在這種情況下,文章的段首句就成了重中之重。范文的段首句This picture presents to us a scene in which a family of three are walking on a country road. 和It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that some children are so addicted to the Internet that they tend to lock themselves indoors on weekends, playing computer games or surfing the Internet. 以及最后一段Personally, the more time children spend on computers, the more physical and mental problems they well suffer from.再加上文章中一些高級詞匯如Consequently,reluctant,peers,resist等等,和一些短句如be addicted to, rid of, suffer from, visiting relatives等給文章在細節(jié)上添分。
科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:寫作題
請先閱讀下面的電子郵件
Dear Li Hua,
I feel very happy to read your e-mail and I really appreciate your English. Congratulations to you. Your English has really improved a lot.
Oh, I have some good news to tell you. I’ve got a good chance to practice my Chinese as an exchange student to China. So, here I’d like to ask you for help—which school is the best one for me to attend in China. Tell me, and then I can tell my school to make contact with it.
Looking forward to your early reply and hope to meet you in China soon.
Yours friendly,
Mary
假設你是李華,請你根據(jù)下列要點,用英文給瑪麗回一封電子郵件,建議她來你所在的學校。理由是:
你校每年都接納交換生;
學校條件好,各種設施好, 有圖書館,電子閱覽室……;
課外活動豐富多彩;
你校學生英語水平好,易于交流;
特別是老師好,教法生動有趣。
注意:可根據(jù)要求加以必要發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯;詞數(shù)為120左右;開頭已寫好(不計入詞數(shù)),但不得抄入答題卡。
參考詞匯:設施:facility 電子閱覽室: electro-reading-room
Hi Mary,
Nice to read your e-mail today. It’s very kind of you to give me encouragement. I owe a lot to you for your help.
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隨著網(wǎng)絡的日益普及,當前有人選擇網(wǎng)絡閱讀,有人則喜歡傳統(tǒng)閱讀。傳統(tǒng)的閱讀方式似乎正在被網(wǎng)絡閱讀方式取代。假如你是某中學的李華,請你以 “Traditional Reading or Online Reading?”為題按照下列表格提供的信息寫一篇英語短文,并發(fā)表自己的看法。
注意:1. 短文詞數(shù)不少于100; 2. 開頭部分已寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);
3. 內(nèi)容充實,結(jié)構(gòu)完整,語意連貫; 4. 短文須寫在答題卷的指定區(qū)域;
5. 書寫須清晰、工整。 6. 短文中不能體現(xiàn)本人真實信息。
Traditional Reading or Online Reading?
With the popularity of the Internet, there seems to be a trend that the traditional reading is being replaced by online reading among people, especially among students.
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1、圖表主要信息(用30個左右英語單詞描述);
2、中國電子商務增長的原因(經(jīng)濟穩(wěn)步增長,人民收入提高,人口大于美國,網(wǎng)上購物方便);
3、你的觀點(可從保護和規(guī)范電子商務市場談起)。
注意:
1、詞數(shù)150左右,開頭已經(jīng)給出,但不計入詞數(shù);
2、作文中不得提及你所在的學校及本人姓名。
3、參考詞匯:cybercrime網(wǎng)絡犯罪;phishing網(wǎng)絡釣魚
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1.簡要描述圖中的信息;
2.說明原因(為了高效學習;鍛煉身體;爭分奪秒……);
3.談談你的看法。
4.詞數(shù):120字.
Ways to spend the weekend
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● 對兩堂繪畫課的具體描述;
● 你從中獲得的啟發(fā)。
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孩子的成長和教育是社會熱議的話題,現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過度依賴等現(xiàn)象十分嚴重。請閱讀下面的漫畫,按要求用英文寫一篇短文。
內(nèi)容要求:
1.描述漫畫內(nèi)容;
2.分析漫畫所揭示的問題;
3.提出你的看法。
注意:
1.短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);
2.考生可適當發(fā)揮,使文章內(nèi)容充實、連貫;
3.詞數(shù)120-150左右;
4.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。
參考詞匯:紅地毯red carpet 鋪路pave the way
From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.
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In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
詞數(shù)少于50,從總分中減去1分。
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