Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤， 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My mother always bought gifts to me for my birthdays. With my fifteen birthday around the corner, she asked me which I wanted. For the first time, I realize how lucky I was to have born in such a fortunate family. I was satisfying and there was nothing more I needed. That was because I told my mother that instead of getting an expensive gift, I’d love to use the money to help others. At the first, she felt surprised. When she realized I was seriously, she offered me 500 yuan. I bought some toys and went to the orphanage in our city. I handed out the toys to the child and had a good time with them.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】to→ for

【2】fifteen→fifteenth

【3】which→what

【4】realize→realized

【5】加been

【6】satisfying→satisfied

【7】because→why

【8】去掉the

【9】seriously→serious

【10】child →children

【解析】

試題分析：每次生日，媽媽都會(huì)給我買禮物。這次生日，媽媽也問我想要什么，我認(rèn)為我生活在這樣一個(gè)美好的家庭很幸運(yùn)，這次不想要禮物了，而是想要幫助別人，媽媽很支持我。

【1】to→ for 考查介詞。Buy sth for sb給某人買某物，固定搭配，所以用 for。

【2】fifteen→fifteenth 考查數(shù)詞。第十五個(gè)生日，用序數(shù)詞，用fifteenth。

【3】which→what 考查關(guān)系詞。引導(dǎo)ask的賓語從句以及做want的賓語，不能用which做賓語，故用what。

【4】realize→realized 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文全文是過去時(shí)態(tài)，故用realized。

【5】加been 考查時(shí)態(tài)。我被生出來，是被動(dòng)語態(tài)，加been。

【6】satisfying→satisfied 考查形容詞。感到滿意，而satisfying是令人滿意的，一般修飾物，故用satisfied 。

【7】because→why 考查關(guān)系詞。I was satisfying and there was nothing more I needed是 I told my mother that instead of getting an expensive gift,I’d love to use the money to help others的原因，不是結(jié)果，正是我對生活的滿意，使我不在想要什么了，而想幫助別人，用why。

【8】去掉the 考查冠詞。At first，首先，固定搭配，不用冠詞，所以去掉the。

【9】seriously→serious 考查形容詞。修飾系動(dòng)詞was用形容詞，用 serious。

【10】child →children考查單復(fù)數(shù)。孤兒院里面應(yīng)該是有很多小孩子的，用復(fù)數(shù)形式，用children。