假如某報社記者Smith正在調(diào)查我們學(xué)校學(xué)生與家庭成員和班級同學(xué)老師之間的關(guān)系處理情況,請你把以上的情況向Smith反映并提出一些如何改進(jìn)關(guān)系的意見。
要點(diǎn)如下:1.目前的實(shí)際情況:學(xué)生與家庭成員以及班級同學(xué)的關(guān)系處理總體上是好的,但也存在著一些問題,與同學(xué)吵架,不聽從家長和老師的教育等。
2.你個人的改進(jìn)意見(至少兩條)。
注意:1.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 2.詞數(shù):100字左右
Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members and classmates as well as teachers is good.We are getting on well with each other.However, there exist some problems.Some students in our school are easy to lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden.What’s worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing.
In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to improve the situation.First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates.Second, when we are not feeling good/happy, we can chat with our friends or teachers or even parents.It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice.
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