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2．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Dear Mary，
I'm glad to hear of you．Learning that you had developed a deep interest in Tang poems．I feel happiness and proud and I'd like to give you a brief introduction to them．
In China，Tang poems are popular with the people of all ages．The Tang dynasty is common recognized as the golden age of poetry．During this period，a lot of excellent poems was written．Tang poems are easy to read but recite．Some of them have translated into many foreign languages．
Now that you are interesting in Tang poems，I will send you the collection of Tang poems by post．I hope you will love it．
Best wishes!
     Yours，
     Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述作者向Mary介紹中國的唐詩．唐詩在中國受到各個年齡段人的歡迎，容易讀和背誦，一些被翻譯成了多種外文．如果Mary喜歡唐詩，作者會郵寄給她一本唐詩集．

解答 Dear Mary，
I'm glad to hear of you．Learning that you had developed a deep interest in Tang poems．I feel happiness and proud and I'd like to give you a brief introduction to them．
In China，Tang poems are popular withthe people of all ages．The Tang dynasty is common recognized as the golden age of poetry．During this period，a lot of excellent poems was written．Tang poems are easy to read but recite．Some of them have∧translated into many foreign languages．
Now that you are interesting in Tang poems，I will send you the collection of Tang poems by post．I hope you will love it．
Best wishes!
     Yours，
     Li Hua．
詳解：
1．of改為from 考查詞語用法．hear of意為"聽說"，hear from意為"收到…的來信"，此處應是：收到…的來信．
2．had改為have 考查動詞時態(tài)．develop雖發(fā)生在過去，但對現(xiàn)在造成了影響，用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)．
3．happiness改為happy 考查形容詞．feel是連系動詞，后接形容詞作表語．
4．去掉the 考查冠詞．此處people表示泛指，不需要加定冠詞the．
5．common改為commonly 考查副詞．recognize是動詞，要用副詞修飾．
6．was改為were 考查主謂一致．主語poems是復數(shù)，謂語動詞也應用復數(shù)were．
7．but改為and 考查連詞．動詞read和recite是并列關(guān)系，用連詞and．
8．加been 考查動詞語態(tài)．主語Some of them和translate之間是動賓關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在完成時的被動語態(tài)．
9．interesting改為interested 考查固定搭配．be interested in意為"對…感興趣"，是固定搭配．
10．the改為a 考查冠詞．根據(jù)句意：我會郵寄給你一本唐詩集．用不定冠詞a，表示泛指．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．