Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分25分）
對(duì)每個(gè)人而言，學(xué)習(xí)是非常重要的。請(qǐng)你以Being a Successful Learner為題，根據(jù)下表的提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)：120左右。

學(xué)習(xí)的重要性	1．科技發(fā)展的需要 2．激烈的社會(huì)競(jìng)爭(zhēng) 3．國(guó)家強(qiáng)盛
成功的學(xué)習(xí)者的共性	獨(dú)立、主動(dòng)、目的明確、學(xué)以致用
你的看法	怎樣成為成功的學(xué)習(xí)者（至少兩點(diǎn)）： 1．…… 2．……

注意：短文的開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
Being a Successful Learner
Study is very important for every individual because we                
                                                                
                                                                
                                                                
                                                                
                                                                

Answer 1

Being a Successful Learner
Study is very important for every individual because we have to acquire new and advanced knowledge to keep pace with the rapid development of science and technology. The fierce competition pushes every one of us to seize every opportunity to study. And as the future generation of China, we should equip ourselves with rich knowledge to make our country stronger and more powerful.
What makes successful learners? Successful learners are similar in many ways. They are independent thinkers and take an active and positive attitude towards their study. Besides, they have clear objectives in mind. They know themselves well and have the competence of applying what they have learnt to practice.
How can we be successful learners? In my opinion, first of all, we should develop our interest in study, as the saying goes, “Interest is the best teacher.” Second, we should form the habit of making plans for our study and keeping a good balance between study and entertainment. Last but not least, remember not to depend on our teachers or textbooks only.

解析從題目的要求我們可知文章應(yīng)該分三段，分別是學(xué)習(xí)的重要性、成功的學(xué)習(xí)者的共性和你的看法，前面兩段要結(jié)合要點(diǎn)陳述，也可以適當(dāng)增減，第三段是開(kāi)放式的，要求寫(xiě)出觀點(diǎn)和理由，要讓人信服。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要有意識(shí)的用一些重要的短語(yǔ)：keep pace with、seize every opportunity、equip ourselves with 、take an active and positive attitude towards 、develop our interest in 、keeping a good balance between，另外句型也很重要，如范文里的：as the saying goes, “Interest is the best teacher.” They know themselves well and have the competence of applying what they have learnt to practice.這里就有what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。還要注意文章的連貫，特別是最后一段：用了first of all, Second, ， Last but not least, 使得文章一氣呵成。