Question

假如你是英國的Mike，你的朋友李華打算到國外留學(xué)，他寫信詢問你什么樣的中國學(xué)生最受國外高校青睞。請你根據(jù)下列要點給對方寫一封回信：

1. 語言是道硬門檻；

2. 適應(yīng)能力很重要；

3. 興趣愛好被看重；

4. 要有社會責(zé)任感。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Li Hua,

     I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. _____________________________________

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Yours,

Mike

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Li Hua,

I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.

As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. "What’s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.

This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.

Yours

Mike

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。也是高考�？嫉奈捏w形式之一。文章給出了簡單的漢語提示，成文時需要考生充分發(fā)揮想象力，使文章內(nèi)容豐富。成文時應(yīng)注意一下幾點：1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全；（1） 語言是道硬門檻； 2） 適應(yīng)能力很重要；（3） 興趣愛好被看重；（4） 要有社會責(zé)任感。2.時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時；3.人稱：第一人稱和第二人稱；4.使用一些高級詞匯、短語及句型，提高文章的檔次；5.恰當(dāng)運用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。

【亮點說明】1.高級句型：Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.  the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses.  those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.  2.連詞和插入語：As far as I know，Besides, What’s more, Last but not the least,

考點：考查應(yīng)用文的寫作。