Question

For about 120 dollars, visitors to China’s Great Wall can now leave their mark on a fake (仿造) wall built recently in the name of preventing graffiti (亂畫) on the real structure.
The management office of the Juyongguan section of the Great Wall in Beijing built the fake wall and will charge 999 yuan for carvings on each brick, daily newspaper The First reported.
With 9,999 bricks available, the marble structure could help management earn 9.9 million yuan. Juyongguan’s management said they were hoping to satisfy visitor’s desire to leave something behind—usually their name or words of love—while discouraging them form caving graffiti on China’s best-known cultural relic.
The Great Wall, which receives four million visitors a year, has suffered greatly from graffiti. But the project has come under some criticism with The First citing (引用) one expert as saying many schemes to ‘protect’ the wall are actually aimed at getting profits from the cultural treasure.
The fake wall is located near the most-visited section of the real wall in Badaling and visitors usually travel to Juyongguan on their way to Badaling.
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以 約30個詞概括短文的要點；
以約120個詞寫一篇短文，就“游客可付費在仿造長城上涂寫留言”這一事件發(fā)表你的看法，并包括如下要點：
以你的實際或虛構(gòu)的經(jīng)歷談談對某些人喜歡在旅游景點隨便涂鴉留言的看法；
對于專門修一段仿造城墻讓游客付高價留言的做法你是贊成還是反對，并簡要陳述你的理由。
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可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
標題自定，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

Answer 1

It is reported that tourists to China’s Great Wall can now leave their mark on a fake wall recently built near the real wall in Badaling if they pay 999yuan.
In China, many visitors have the hobby of carving graffiti on places of interest, especially on some famous cultural relics. Last year I went to the Great Wall and found many people had left names and ugly words on the Wall, which destroys many historic bricks. In my opinion, such people should feel ashamed of leaving their marks on the great relics which were created by our ancestors.
So personally I quite agree with this brilliant project though it has caused criticism from some people. The Great Wall would be ruined one day if we didn’t take any steps to protect it. The fake wall is really a good idea because we can protect our relic as well as making profits from the project.

這篇書面表達給了一段材料：屬于根據(jù)原文內(nèi)容寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認真看清題目要求，先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果，這道題目要求比較嚴格，所以在寫作之前一定要看清題目。題目還要求你可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。