Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：l.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

With graduation drawing near, my classmates and I had decided to do something meaning to the memory of our school life. After a heated discussion, we agreed with making a video to record our experiences at school.

To begin with, material collecting took us a wholly week , during which we interviewed our teacher and took pictures of every aspect of school life. After that, the toughest part was editing and we debated for long over how to put into the video. Even though our opinions were divided, some compromises were made in the end. To my delight, a video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was very received. The students and teachers moved into tears and shared a great time together. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.

Answer 1

【答案】1.去掉had

2. meaning → meaningful

3. with → on

4. wholly → whole

5. teacher → teachers

6. how → what

7. my → our

8. a → the

9. very → well

10.在teachers和moved之間加were

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了，作者臨近畢業(yè)，和同學(xué)們決定制作一個錄像帶來紀(jì)念他們的學(xué)校生活，通過努力，他們制作了一個視頻，視頻在畢業(yè)典禮上播放時，反響非常熱烈。

1. 考查時態(tài)。全文講過去發(fā)生的事情，所以時態(tài)用一般過去時，要去掉had。故去掉had。

2. 考查形容詞。此處指“有意義的事情”，復(fù)合不定代詞+形容詞，應(yīng)用形容詞meaningful。故將meaning改為meaningful。

3. 考查固定搭配。固定搭配agree on (doing) sth.，意為“就......達(dá)成一致”。故將with改為on。

4. 考查形容詞。名詞week要形容詞修飾，所以用形容詞whole（整個的）。故將wholly改為whole。

5. 考查名詞的數(shù)。由語境可知，此處不只一位教師，應(yīng)是多位教師，要用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將teacher改為teachers。

6. 考查疑問詞。此處是“疑問詞+ to do”做debated的賓語，此處指“放什么到視頻里”，應(yīng)用疑問詞what。what作put的賓語。故將how改為what。

7. 考查代詞。此處指“令我們開心的是”，人稱指代不一致，應(yīng)用our。故將my改為our。

8. 考查冠詞。video在上文已提及過，再次提及應(yīng)用定冠詞the，表特指。故將a改為the。

9. 考查固定搭配。此處指“視頻很受歡迎”，固定搭配be well received，意為“很受歡迎、廣泛接受、接受效果好”，應(yīng)用副詞well。故將very改為well。

10. 考查語態(tài)。主語The students and teachers和動詞moved之間是被動關(guān)系，應(yīng)用被動語態(tài)（be done）。故在teachers和moved之間加were。