假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Time fly like an arrow. I’m already in Senior Grade 3 before I realized it. It will be only a little more than eight months before I graduate middle school. At the present, I’m busy review my lessons in order to take the College Entrance Examination. I hope to go to Beijing University, that is one of the best university not only in China but also in the world. I’ll try my best to turn your dream into reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hardly to realize their dreams. I do believe everyone will be able to enter an university or college.


【小題1】fly-flies
【小題2】realized-realize
【小題3】graduate后加from
【小題4】the去掉
【小題5】review-reviewing
【小題6】that-which
【小題7】university-universties
【小題8】your-my
【小題9】hardly-hard
【小題10】an-a /an去掉

解析試題分析：文章介紹一名高三學(xué)生對(duì)未來(lái)的憧憬和努力是實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的決心。
【小題1】時(shí)光象箭一樣飛速。主語(yǔ)是time謂語(yǔ)是單數(shù)：fly-flies
【小題2】我還沒(méi)有意識(shí)到呢都已經(jīng)高三了。這句話用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)：realized-realize
【小題3】還有8個(gè)多月我就中學(xué)畢業(yè)了。graduate from從…中畢業(yè)
【小題4】現(xiàn)在我在忙著復(fù)習(xí)功課，為了參加高考。At present是固定詞組“現(xiàn)在”，the去掉
【小題5】be busy doing忙于做….；review-reviewing
【小題6】我想上北京大學(xué)，這不僅在國(guó)內(nèi)在世界上也是最好的大學(xué)之一。這是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，不能用.that，用which引導(dǎo)
【小題7】one of+可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)：university-universties
【小題8】我會(huì)盡力把我的夢(mèng)想變成現(xiàn)實(shí)。人稱錯(cuò)誤：your-my
【小題9】大部分同學(xué)也在努力學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)現(xiàn)他們的夢(mèng)想，hardly“幾乎不”，改成hard“努力”
【小題10】university 是輔音開(kāi)頭的單詞用不定冠詞a，或不要冠詞an
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