Question

生活中困難不可避免，面對困難需要信心。假如你是李華，嘗試舉例說明信心在學(xué)習(xí)、考試、生活等方面的作用，并就面對困難的態(tài)度談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />注意：
(1)可適當(dāng)加入發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫;
(2)詞數(shù)：100左右。

Answer 1

It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.
Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster. Accordingly, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!

解析試題分析：開放性作文只給出了一個話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。本文的話題是明信心在學(xué)習(xí)、考試、生活等方面的作用。考生可以從自己的親身經(jīng)歷中選擇一個例子來說明如果沒有了信心，就什么也沒有了。所以我們一定要讓自己在做任何事情的時候充滿信心。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文中對于連接詞的使用非常到位，如Accordingly, On the whole。另外在高級句式的選擇上也有自己的特色，如 It is well-known that…中it作為形式主語，真正的主語是后面的that從句。文章的結(jié)尾很也有特點(diǎn)：And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!用否定詞加強(qiáng)了語氣。
考點(diǎn)：考察開放性作文