Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你所在的班級(jí)最近舉辦了一次主題為“Learn to Be Thankful(學(xué)會(huì)感恩)”的演講比賽。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹這次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包含如下要點(diǎn)：

1.班主任發(fā)表主題演講，號(hào)召同學(xué)們學(xué)會(huì)感恩；

2.同學(xué)們以自身的經(jīng)歷為例，表達(dá)對(duì)父母的愛(ài)和感謝；

3.你自己的感受……

注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；

2.可以增加適當(dāng)情節(jié)以使行文連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Recently a speech contest was held in my class under the theme of “Learn to Be Thankful”.Our head teacher made a speech at first and called on all the students to learn to be thankful.Then some students told us their stories between them and their parents.Some were so touching that many of us were moved to tears.At last we students all expressed our love and thanks to our parents.

I learned a lot from the activity.We get love from others,so we should also give our love back to people around us,including our parents,our teachers,and our friends.Maybe we can only do some small things for them.If everyone dedicates a little love to others,the world will become more wonderful.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，材料是考生熟悉的東西，考生不難理解寫(xiě)作的目的和要求�？忌�重點(diǎn)應(yīng)認(rèn)真審題，審題包括幾個(gè)方面:1.文章的時(shí)態(tài)2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的把握準(zhǔn)確到位。你所在的班級(jí)最近舉辦了一次主題為“Learn to Be Thankful(學(xué)會(huì)感恩)”的演講比賽，這句話(huà)其實(shí)也是一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，有的考生把它給漏掉了。3.考生要盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力和語(yǔ)言的組織能力

點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)作文，當(dāng)然基本功很重要，好的英語(yǔ)作文中肯定必不可少的得有長(zhǎng)句和復(fù)合句，這只能靠考生平時(shí)的練習(xí)。但是，有時(shí)候即使句子寫(xiě)得很好，但分?jǐn)?shù)還是不夠高。其實(shí)，說(shuō)到底，是因?yàn)榭忌�的英語(yǔ)作文中缺少閃光點(diǎn)，句子寫(xiě)得很好，但是嚼之無(wú)味，很難把作文分?jǐn)?shù)提上去。