Question

目前我國(guó)大力提倡構(gòu)建能源節(jié)約型社會(huì)。下圖是你在校園所見(jiàn)到的一些現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)成員的身份，描述課后電腦仍開(kāi)著、教室燈亮著、廢紙亂扔、水龍頭一直流水這些現(xiàn)象，起草一份倡議書(shū)，向全校師生發(fā)出節(jié)約能源的倡議。

注意：1. 開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
2. 字?jǐn)?shù)不少于100。
3. 可根據(jù)需要補(bǔ)充與文章有關(guān)的信息。
4. 主要內(nèi)容：描述圖畫(huà)，發(fā)出倡議。
Dear teachers and students,
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
   
Students’ Union

Answer 1

Dear teachers and students,
Our government is trying hard to build an energy-saving society. It is everybody’s duty to work hard and reach this goal.
However, not everybody has realized the importance of it. Take our school for example. Sometimes we can see that lights and computers are still on after class. Some students even forget to turn off the tap after using it and have water running all the time. Our papers are printed on only one side, causing much waste.
It’s time we did something to avoid this kind of waste. Firstly, make sure that all the lights and other electric facilities are turned off when we leave the rooms. Try to form the habit of turning off the tap immediately after using it. What’s more, papers should be printed on both sides and reused if possible.
In a word, if everybody has the awareness of reducing the waste and takes action, we can contribute to our society.
Students’ Union

解析試題分析：考查看圖作文。本文在文字提示里清楚告訴我們本文的話(huà)題為：構(gòu)建能源節(jié)約型社會(huì)；要求描述課后電腦仍開(kāi)著、教室燈亮著、廢紙亂扔、水龍頭一直流水這些現(xiàn)象；說(shuō)明這些現(xiàn)象不利于構(gòu)建節(jié)約型社會(huì)，會(huì)讓我們養(yǎng)成鋪張浪費(fèi)的壞習(xí)慣，也會(huì)影響我們的環(huán)境。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。
考點(diǎn)：
點(diǎn)評(píng)：看圖作文要求考生將畫(huà)面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫(huà)用文字表達(dá)出來(lái)，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫(huà)中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類(lèi)的寫(xiě)作素材，考生要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過(guò)程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素；如果是說(shuō)明文或議論文，考生則首先要對(duì)圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫(huà)的信息進(jìn)行說(shuō)明或議論。此時(shí)考生一定要注意把握?qǐng)D畫(huà)的中心思想，寫(xiě)出圖畫(huà)要反映的內(nèi)容。