假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Bob在離高考近三個(gè)月時(shí)間發(fā)來郵件詢問你的備考情況。請給他回一封郵件，要點(diǎn)如下：

1．取得的進(jìn)步；

2．存在的問題；

3．目前的狀態(tài)；

4．后階段的打算（兩點(diǎn)）。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)120詞左右。

2. 開頭語和結(jié)尾語已為你寫好；不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to have received your E-mail and thank you for your concern about my preparations for the coming College Entrance Examination.

Sincerely

Lihua.

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to have received your E-mail and thank you for your concern about my preparations for the coming College Entrance Examination. I have made great progress in all my subjects and become increasingly skillful at answering the questions. There are, however, still some problems with my studies. All my subjects, for example, are just above the average and none of them ranks top in my class. Confident but a little worried, I’m now busy with my studies from morning till night, making use of every minute to learn more. In the months ahead, I will, on the one hand, try to improve efficiency and do more exercises to have a better insight into the questions. On the other hand, I will try to keep calm and confident, making sure that I’m always at my best for every exam. I believe I will succeed in the College Entrance Examination. (127 words)

Sincerely

Lihua.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇書信類作文，給同學(xué)寫一封郵件，要點(diǎn)如下：1．取得的進(jìn)步；2．存在的問題；3．目前的狀態(tài)；4．后階段的打算（兩點(diǎn)）。需要注意的有：1. 詞數(shù)120詞左右。2. 開頭語和結(jié)尾語已為你寫好；不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】：本文用了很多句型，祈使句，舉例等來說明文章需要的要點(diǎn)。并且寫出了所有的要點(diǎn)，沒有漏任何一個(gè)。用了適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)，人稱用的也很合適。運(yùn)用了恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞；句式和定語從句等結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用也為文章增添了亮色，按照要求的要點(diǎn)一一寫出了，并且簡潔。長度也在要求的范圍內(nèi)。

考點(diǎn)：考查書信類作文

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