假設(shè)你是李華，最近參加了為期兩周的“倫敦夏令營”活動(dòng)。期間你住在Smith夫婦家中，他們?yōu)槟闾峁┝顺�、住、行及旅游方面的幫助。�?qǐng)寫一封電子郵件感謝他們。內(nèi)容需要包括以下要點(diǎn)：

已安全回到中國家中；

感謝Smith夫婦的幫助。

注意：

詞數(shù)100左右；

開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

How time flies!

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,

How time flies! My time in the two-week summer camp seemed as if it happened yesterday.

I have already returned to China safe and sound. When I think of the wonderful two weeks I spent in London, I just can’t help thinking of both of you and want to express my gratitude to you. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay such a happy and wonderful experience. I have learned quite a lot, not only of English but also your culture. And I really enjoyed the fun and laughter we shared with each other. It was your hospitality and great help that made my journey fruitful and worthwhile. I will cherish the merry memories for the rest of my life. I hope we can keep in touch.

I wish you all best!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信類型的作文，需要注意寫書信的格式，要有收信人以及落款，落款是可以使用sincerely、yours等詞匯表祝愿。注意文中所給的信息，不可遺漏，可以多進(jìn)行一些補(bǔ)充，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。正文部分要注意時(shí)態(tài)的選用，整個(gè)夏令營活動(dòng)發(fā)生在過去，應(yīng)使用過去式和完成時(shí)。再給予祝福時(shí)，應(yīng)注意時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換。另外使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次也是很有必要的。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】 以感嘆句How time flies!開頭，增強(qiáng)情感的抒發(fā)。使用了can’t help thinking of，express my gratitude to sb、shared with、keep in touch等短語，是文章變得更充實(shí)，流暢。另外。My time in the two-week summer camp seemed as if it happened yesterday.還用到表語從句，It was your hospitality and great help that made my journey fruitful and worthwhile.為強(qiáng)調(diào)句，提高了文章的整體水平。除此之外，文章多處使用定語形式多樣，My time in the two-week summer camp中使用介詞短語作定語，the wonderful two weeks I spent in London使用定語從語。還用到not only…but also…句型。單詞hospitality 、fruitful 、worthwhile等詞的使用，體現(xiàn)其詞匯量的豐富，也提高了文章的檔次。

考點(diǎn)：考查書信作文的寫作

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