Question

假定你是李華，你將去英國(guó)伯明翰Iselly Bishop School作一年交換生，請(qǐng)給該校負(fù)責(zé)此項(xiàng)目的Mr. Clark寫(xiě)一封email,詢問(wèn)以下內(nèi)容：
1. 宿舍里是否有廚房，是否能夠做些簡(jiǎn)單的中餐；
2. 是否能提前得到課程時(shí)間表，還需要做什么準(zhǔn)備；
3. 你感興趣的其他問(wèn)題。
參考詞匯： exchange student 交換生
注意：1. 適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)100 字左右。
Dear Mr. Clark,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Clark,
I’m a senior high student from China who has signed up for your exchange program. I’m writing for your help with some issues regarding my study in your school.
Firstly, is our dormitory equipped with a kitchen, where we can cook for ourselves once in a while? Secondly, is there any way that I can have the timetable in advance so that I can make full preparations for some courses?            Thirdly, what necessities, besides the ones on the guidebook, should I bring with me and will there be some trips organized during our stay there ?I appreciate your time and help.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua

解析試題分析：
本文是一篇給出漢語(yǔ)提示的提綱類書(shū)信。文章只給出了簡(jiǎn)單的漢語(yǔ)提示，這需要考生充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將文章內(nèi)容流暢地表達(dá)出來(lái)。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全；（1）宿舍里是否有廚房，是否能夠做些簡(jiǎn)單的中餐；（2）是否能提前得到課程時(shí)間表，還需要做什么準(zhǔn)備；（3）你感興趣的其他問(wèn)題。2.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；3.人稱：以第一人稱；4.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢。6.詞數(shù)控制在100左右。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】使用了連詞和插入語(yǔ)：Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly；使用了從句：I’m a senior high student from China who has signed up for your exchange program. Is there any way that I can have the timetable in advance so that I can make full preparations for some courses?高級(jí)短語(yǔ)： Looking forward to，make full preparations for，equipped with，signed up for
考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言的運(yùn)用能力。