Question

假定你是李華，看到班上有部分同學在完成作業(yè)時，不自己獨立完成而是抄襲他人的作業(yè)，針對這種現象，請你以My opinion on copying others’ homework為題談談你自己的看法。

主要原因	個人看法
作業(yè)多，偏難	要誠實，勤奮學習
對功課不感興趣，懶惰	……..
完成任務，使老師高興	……..

Answer 1

My opinion on copying others’ homework

It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework at school. As students, we have to do plenty of homework at home and at school, but sometimes we have some homework which is too difficult for us. On the other hand, not only are some of us lazy but we are also not so interested in some subjects as well. They don’t work hard. In order to finish the assignments to please their teachers, some students copy others’ homework.

In my opinion, it is wrong to copy others’ homework because it breaks the rules of school. What we students should do is to be honest and try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying. Even though/if we have trouble doing our homework, we can ask our classmates or teachers for help.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求以“My opinion on copying others’ homework”為題，談談對抄襲他人作業(yè)這種現象的看法。寫作要點包括：抄襲作業(yè)的主要原因；個人看法這兩個方面�？梢愿鶕�所給要點適當進行拓展，使語句變得通順。不要出現標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點，也進行了適當的拓展，并注意語句的連貫性；范文還使用了主語從句、定語從句、讓步狀語從句等語法知識，具備較強的語言運用能力。

語法方面：主語從句①It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework at school，②What we students should do；定語從句which is too difficult for us；倒裝句not only are some of us lazy but we are also not so interested in some subjects as well；原因狀語從句because it breaks the rules of schools；讓步狀語從句Even though/if we have trouble doing our homework等，語法知識運用嫻熟，顯示了較強的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

篇章結構方面：范文注意使用as students, but, on the other hand, in my opinion等來銜接句子和段落，使表達變得更有條理；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了plenty of, work hard, be interested in, as well, in order to, try to do, by ourselves, instead of, have trouble doing, ask...for help等，使作文的內容變得充實。

考點：命題類材料作文