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【題目】假如你英語學(xué)得很好，老師要你用英語寫一篇簡(jiǎn)單介紹，談?wù)勗鯓訉W(xué)好英語的體會(huì)。介紹內(nèi)容如下：

簡(jiǎn)況：學(xué)習(xí)英語已有四年多；起初覺得英語難學(xué)，大多數(shù)音發(fā)不好，不少生詞拼不準(zhǔn)，語法規(guī)則記不住，后來在老師和同學(xué)們的幫助下進(jìn)步很快，現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)情況良好。

體會(huì)：要用最短的時(shí)間獲得最大的學(xué)習(xí)效果，非下苦功不可；課內(nèi)外要多聽多說，對(duì)讀寫也要足夠重視。

注意：

1、標(biāo)題已給，不記入詞數(shù)。

2、介紹須包括所給要點(diǎn)，但不要逐條翻譯。

3、詞數(shù)：100左右。

How to learn English well

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Learn English Well

It is over four years since I began to learn English. At first I found it quite difficult. I couldn't get most of the sounds right, spell new words correctly or remember the rules of grammar. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made rapid progress. Now I am getting on well with my English study.

Six years study has taught me that one cannot learn English well without hard work. We must do more listening and speaking both in and out of class. Enough attention should also be paid to reading and writing.

Only in this way can we get the best results in the shortest possible time.

【解析】試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文。使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。要點(diǎn)：簡(jiǎn)況：學(xué)習(xí)英語已有四年多；起初覺得英語難學(xué)，大多數(shù)音發(fā)不好，不少生詞拼不準(zhǔn)，語法規(guī)則記不住，后來在老師和同學(xué)們的幫助下進(jìn)步很快，現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)情況良好。

體會(huì)：要用最短的時(shí)間獲得最大的學(xué)習(xí)效果，非下苦功不可；課內(nèi)外要多聽多說，對(duì)讀寫也要足夠重視。提綱類作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來，在寫作的時(shí)候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成一個(gè)整體。同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】：本文的亮點(diǎn)在于短語的使用，如At first，with the help of，make rapid progress，get on well with；另外高級(jí)句式的使用也較多，如. Enough attention should also be paid to reading and writing. 中的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。Only in this way can we get the best results in the shortest possible time.中的倒裝句用法等。