Question

My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important lo young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took care him so that my father could cast more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday,I found her silting in bed, made new shoes for me!
I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. My grandmother is so a kind and hardworking woman. I’ ll respect and love her forever.

Answer 1

【小題1】seventy--- seventies       
【小題2】But去掉    
【小題3】important --- importance 
【小題4】took care of   
【小題5】cost--- spend
【小題6】encouraged--- encourages 
【小題7】bad --- badly
【小題8】made---making 
【小題9】moving---moved   
【小題10】so --- such

解析試題分析：
【小題1】70歲應該說in her seventies。
【小題2】although與but不能連用，所以But去掉。
【小題3】of 之后用名詞。
【小題4】took care of是固定用法，意思是照料，照看。
【小題5】spend …on sth.是固定用法，意思是在某事上花（金錢或時間等）。
【小題6】表示現(xiàn)在的情況或狀態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以encouraged--- encourages。
【小題7】用副詞修飾形容詞。
【小題8】“她”和“做新鞋”之間是主動關系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞，所以made---making。
【小題9】-ed修飾人，所以moving---moved。
【小題10】so之后接形容詞，such之后接名詞，所以so --- such。
考點：考查短文改錯