Question

請品讀下面諺語，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
He who makes no mistakes makes nothing. （不犯錯的人必將一事無成。）
注意: ①無須寫標(biāo)題；
②除詩歌外，文體不限;
③文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
④詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

He who makes no mistakes makes nothing.
　　Many people around us are afraid of making mistakes. They even feel it a shame to make a
mistake. That’s completely wrong. Other people, however, think that making mistakes is an
essential part of growing. They don't care about making mistakes, they just want to experiment
and obtain experience.
As a matter of fact, no one never makes any mistakes. Children would fall down many times
before they can walk and no one could become an expert until he has failed over and over again.
As far as I am concerned, being afraid of making mistakes is a mistake itself. Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress. Thomas Edison could not have become a scientist if he had not made thousands of mistakes. Making mistakes for pursuing truth is much better than doing nothing. That is, he who makes no mistakes makes nothing.

試題分析：這是一篇開放性作文，題目給出了一個話題，要求結(jié)合實例解釋這個諺語。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】They even feel it a shame to make a mistake.這句話用的是it做形式賓語，Other people, however, think that making mistakes is an essential part of growing.這句話用了插入語和動名詞做主語， Children would fall down many times before they can walk and no one could become an expert until he has failed over and over again.這句話用了兩個時間狀語從句， Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.這句話用了only的倒裝句，. That is, he who makes no mistakes makes nothing. 這句話是一句諺語，還有文章還用As far as I am concerned,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。