Question

最近，你看到某英文報(bào)社正在征集主題為“如何才能受人歡迎”的短文，對(duì)此你很感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示談?wù)勛约旱南敕�，給該報(bào)社投稿。

要點(diǎn)提示：

　　1、衣著干凈、整齊，保持微笑

　　2、誠(chéng)實(shí)，樂(lè)于助人

3、懂得與人合作

　　4、其他

注意：

　�、僭~數(shù)100左右；②文章的標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

How to be popular

Most people would like to be popular with others,  but what is the secret to achieve popularity?  In fact, it is very simple.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

How to be popular

Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieve popularity? In fact, it is very simple. The first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we dress well and smile warmly. In this way people will surely be impressed by our confidence. Another important step is to build our character. We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary. It’s also important to put others first. If we know how to work and get on well with others, then people will feel comfortable enough to trust us. I am sure we’ll be popular with others if we can do all of the above.

【解析】這是篇是開(kāi)放式的作文，只提出了一個(gè)話題“如何才能受人歡迎”和內(nèi)容上的簡(jiǎn)要提示。結(jié)合所給文章的開(kāi)頭確定要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容為“如何才能受人歡迎”的具體做法，也就是要點(diǎn)提示的1、2、3、4點(diǎn)；注意要把第4點(diǎn)補(bǔ)充完整。四點(diǎn)內(nèi)容的銜接可用The first step is…; We should…. Another important step is…. It’s also important to do …;最后注意要有個(gè)總結(jié)：I am sure we’ll be popular with others if we can do all of the above.