假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

1.把important改為importance

2.在waited后面加上for

3.把past改為passed

4.把feet改為foot

5.把when改為than

6.把take a next bus改為take the next bus

7.把other改為another

8.把do 改為did

9.把it去掉

10.把close改為closing

【解析】

1. of+抽象名詞，of短語相當(dāng)于這個(gè)名詞的同根形容詞，作為表語表示主語的性質(zhì)或特征。所以此處應(yīng)該用important的名詞形式，故將important改為importance。

2. 后面接賓語必須加介詞for，wait for…等待，等候。故此處要加上for。

3. 過去的，以前的；adv.超過，遠(yuǎn)于。此處要填的是謂語動(dòng)詞，表示30分鐘過去了，要用動(dòng)詞pass，由于是過去式。故此處用passed。

4. on foot，步行，此處應(yīng)用foot的單數(shù)形式。故將feet改為foot。

5. sooner…than…，表示一…就…。句意為：我剛離開公交車就來了。故此次將when改為then。

6. a next bus中a是非特指的一個(gè)，與next下一個(gè)搭配不妥。take the next bus，換下一班車。句意是如果我換乘下一班車。故將take a next bus改為take the next bus。

7. other，adj，別的；其他的；另外的，通常用在單數(shù)或復(fù)數(shù)名詞的前面，another，adj，另一個(gè)，泛指不定數(shù)中（三者或三者以上）。此處句意是我再等另一個(gè)30分鐘，故將other改為another。

8.

9. effort in… ：著力于，花費(fèi)精力…，這是一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，that引導(dǎo)we have put in修飾前面的effort，而后面的代詞it在此處多余。故去掉it。

10. close to doing…接近做…，這里to是介詞，后面接動(dòng)詞必須是動(dòng)名詞形式。句意是：現(xiàn)在無論何時(shí)我快要失去耐心的時(shí)候，我就會(huì)想起這次經(jīng)歷。故把lose改為losing。

考點(diǎn)：考查介詞，副詞，固定句式，固定短語，定語從句、狀語從句等一些語法知識(shí)。

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