Question

如果有一場神奇的價值拍賣會 (auction)，你可以拍下你最想要的東西，你會為什么而舉牌？請在以下的競拍內(nèi)容中，選出你最想得到的三樣?xùn)|西，并闡明你選擇的理由。
競拍內(nèi)容：愛心、夢想、名牌大學(xué)錄取通知書（admission notice）、聰明、快樂、誠信、自由、權(quán)利、友情、金錢等。
100字左右， 不含開頭語。
Different people may bid for different things.
                                                                                   
                                                                                  
                                                                                     

Answer 1

Different people may bid for different things. As for me, I want dream, friendship and an admission notice to a famous university most.
Dreams would be on the top of my list. Only by pursuing our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled life. Money can buy a comfortable life , but without dreams, even a millionaire would find his life boring.
A person without friends can never be happy. Our life is full of joys and sorrows, which we need people to share with. Faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help. Just as a saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friendship ca help us through ups and downs of life, so friendship would be in my list as well.

試題分析：本題為材料作文，但內(nèi)容很新穎，其實就是再考查你什么下面的幾個方面哪個更重要，題目的設(shè)題方式很有趣。對于選擇的對象可謂智者見智，仁者見仁，只要思想健康進(jìn)步，說明理由，詳略得當(dāng)既可。比如你開篇可以選擇friendship,起到開門見山的作用，然后用詳細(xì)的篇幅寫出原因即可。
【亮點說明】所給范文達(dá)到了高考作文的復(fù)雜句型結(jié)構(gòu)的要求，在文中起到了畫龍點晴的作用，使文章有氣勢，例如Only by pursuing our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled life.正解且恰到好處的用到了倒裝。同時也使用上了大家耳熟能詳?shù)闹V語，使文章增色不少，例如：“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
【考點】考查學(xué)生語言的綜合運用能力