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3．你班最近舉行了一次班會，討論怎樣使英語學習變成一件快樂的事．請你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，為某英語網(wǎng)站寫一篇短文，談談你們的討論情況并提出你的建議．

討論情況	1．課上師生或生生互動；
	2．課外活動：演講或晚會等；
	3．日常運用英語：口頭或書面交流；
你的建議	（根據(jù)自己經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點建議）

注意：1．含所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，勿簡單翻譯．
      2．詞數(shù)120左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Recently we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．
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Best wishes．
 Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇"圖表+提綱"作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇短文．介紹班級就"怎樣使英語學習變成一件快樂的事"這一問題的討論情況并提出自己的建議．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
寫作要點：1．介紹討論情況； 2．建議；3．總結．
重要短語：the way to do （做某事的方法），first of all（首先），have interactive activities（有許多互動活動），such as（例如），have fun doing sth（做某事有樂趣），take part in （參加），communicate with…（與…交流），out-of-class activities（課外活動），need to do sth（需要做某事），join English clubs（參加英語俱樂部），make pen-friends（交筆友），on the Internet（在網(wǎng)絡上），all in all（總之）．
【高分句型一】
1．Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．
此處是連接副詞"how"引導的賓語從句，形式為"疑問詞how+to do"，主句為"we had a discussion on"．
【高分句型二】
2．we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，①whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，②because ③using English is the best way to learn．
①此處是連接詞"whether"引導的讓步狀語從句，主句為"we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people"．
②此處是由連詞"because"引導的原因狀語從句．
     ③此處是由動名詞短語"using English"作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．
【高分句型三】
3．All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．
此處是由疑問代詞"what"引導的主語從句，"what"在主語從句中做動詞"need"的賓語，謂語動詞為"is"，句子作主語謂語動詞用單數(shù)，表語為"more free time and more space"．

解答 Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．【高分句型一】Most students believe that there are many ways to do so．First of all，we can have more interactive activities in class，such as discussions，interviews，story-telling and role-play． In this way，we can have more fun learning English．（1．課上師生或生生互動） Secondly，we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech contests and English evenings．Through these activities we can improve our English skills in an easy and relaxing way．（2．課外活動：演講或晚會等）Thirdly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．【高分句型二】（3．日常運用英語：口頭或書面交流）（討論情況）
These ideas sound reasonable and practical．From my experience，there are many other interesting and relaxing ways．For example，we can listen to English songs and watch English movies．We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen-friends on the Internet．（建議）
All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．【高分句型三】（總結）

點評 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關鍵是認真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．