Question

4．假設你是李華，是你校模擬聯(lián)合國大會主席．你校將舉辦第五次模聯(lián)活動，請給你們的外教Smith老師寫封信，邀請他擔任指導老師（advisor）．
信的內(nèi)容包括：
1．主題：全球氣候；
2．舉辦時間和地點；
3．指導老師的任務．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
模擬聯(lián)合國大會MUN
Dear Mr．Smith，
Our school is going to hold the fifth Model United Nations on November 10 and 11 in Meeting Rooms One，Two and Three．The theme is global climate．We sincerely invite you to be one of the advisors．
There are some new members in MUN，and the process，how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper，etc．a(chǎn)re too complicated for them．Therefore，advisors are needed to train them．Besides，in order to improve their English，some teams are determined to use English as their work language．How to express themselves properly and correctly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem．So we are in great need of native English speakers as our advisors．I know you are a MUN lover．Do come and join us．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Our school is going to hold the fifth Model United Nations on November 10 and 11 in Meeting Rooms One，Two and Three
我們學校將于11月10日和11日在一、二、三號會議室舉行第五屆聯(lián)合國示范大會．
高分句型二：
How to express themselves properly and correctly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem．
如何正確地表達自己的口頭或書面的英語是一個問題．如何正確正確地表達自己的口頭或書面的英語是一個問題．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
Our school is going to hold the fifth Model United Nations on November 10 and 11 in Meeting Rooms One，Two and Three（高分句型一）．The theme is global climate．We sincerely invite you to be one of the advisors．
There are some new members in MUN，and the process，how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper，etc．a(chǎn)re too complicated for them．Therefore，advisors are needed to train them．Besides，in order to improve their English，some teams are determined to use English as their work language．How to express themselves properly and correctly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem（高分句型二）．So we are in great need of native English speakers as our advisors．I know you are a MUN lover．Do come and join us．
                                                   Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．