Question

假如你是李華，一名剛剛進(jìn)入高三的學(xué)生。2014年高考在即，面對(duì)壓力，想和父母說(shuō)說(shuō)心里話(huà)，請(qǐng)你用英文在你的博客上以書(shū)信的形式表達(dá)出來(lái)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

知心話(huà)	對(duì)父母的感謝	感謝他們傾注關(guān)愛(ài)，關(guān)心鼓勵(lì)
對(duì)父母的希望	1. 和他們多交流，使自己保持良好狀態(tài)
2. 創(chuàng)造條件，給自己提供實(shí)時(shí)幫助
學(xué)習(xí)打算	考生自擬（至少寫(xiě)兩點(diǎn)）

注意：

短文須包括以上所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。

詞數(shù)100左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mom and Dad,

   The annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could

have a heart-to-heart talk with you.                                                             

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

                                                                                         

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

                                                                                         

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

                                                                                         

                                                                                        

                                                                                        

                                                                                         

                                                                                        

Yours ever

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Mom and Dad,

The annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you.

To begin with, I am grateful to all the love, care and encouragement you have given me all these years. Meanwhile, it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me. In this way, I can always be in a good state in the coming year. Besides, I also hope that you can create necessary conditions, thus providing me with timely help.

   For my part, I am determined to concentrate more time and energy on my studies and, if any problem arises, turn to my teachers immediately. What’s more, I will pay special attention to maths where I used to score low. After all, a balanced development is essential in the college entrance examination.

Yours ever,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循特定的文體格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語(yǔ)的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒(méi)把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫(xiě)一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句�？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語(yǔ)，句式。要注意用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如around the corner ，communicate with ，am determined to, am grateful to, pay special attention to,還運(yùn)用了if，where引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：To begin with，In this way，Besides, What’s more等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。