Question

1．最近，你班就"90后的成長(zhǎng)"話(huà)題進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)社會(huì)調(diào)查．調(diào)查顯示，人們對(duì)"90后"青少年的現(xiàn)狀褒貶不一．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，并談?wù)勀阕约鹤鳛橐幻?90后"的感想．
注意：1．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯．
      2．詞數(shù)150左右．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．參考詞匯：挫折frustration

優(yōu)點(diǎn)	缺點(diǎn)	你自己的感想
1．思想獨(dú)立、有志向… 2． 樂(lè)于接受并嘗試新事物… 3．自信、熱情… 4．珍惜友情，善于交流…	1．依賴(lài)性強(qiáng)… 2．心理抗挫能力不足… 3．缺乏責(zé)任感… 4．自控力差…	（至少兩點(diǎn)）

Recently our class has conducted a survey about"The growth of post-90's generation"．People's opinions on it are divided．__________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
What's more，they have many new ideas，which makes them more creative．
更重要的是，他們有很多新的想法，這使得他們更具創(chuàng)造性．
高分句型二：
As a member of them，I think we post-90's generation should be aware of our own strengths and weaknesses，so that we can put emphasis on perfecting ourselves．
作為其中的一員，我想我們90后的一代應(yīng)該了解自己的長(zhǎng)處和短處，使我們可以把重點(diǎn)放在完善自己．

解答 Recently our class has conducted a survey about"The growth of post-90's generation"．People have different opinions on it．
      Some people think that the post-90's generation are confident，ambitious and independent in thinking．They are fond of new things，ready to accept and try them．What's more，they have many new ideas，which makes them more creative（高分句型一）．It's especially worth mentioning that they are enthusiastic and caring．They treasure friendship and are good at communicating with others．
      However，others argue that the post-90's generation are too self-centered and dependent on their parents in life or teachers in study．They tend to live a comfortable life but are less able to overcome frustration．Besides，some of them lack the sense of responsibility and don't know how to show gratitude to others．Worse still，many are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet．
      As a member of them，I think we post-90's generation should be aware of our own strengths and weaknesses，so that we can put emphasis on perfecting ourselves（高分句型二）．Only in this way can we gain respect and faith from others．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．