Question

高考越來越近了，很多高考生家長都為孩子請來高考保姆（nurse），學校掛高考倒計時牌，每天上午、下午第一節(jié)課前，由老師帶領全班學生喊口號……對于家長和學校的這些做法人們褒貶不一。

請根據(jù)以上說明、寫作要點和寫作要求，為校刊“英語角”版面寫一篇短文。

寫作要點：

1．贊成者觀點；

2．反對者觀點；

3．自己的觀點。

寫作要求：

1．短文詞數(shù)不少于100；

2．開頭部分已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3．可根據(jù)情況增減細節(jié)，詳略得當；

4．不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。

參考詞匯：倒計時牌countdown board  口號slogan

With less than 60 days before the College Entrance Examinations, _________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

    Many parents hire nurses to take care of their children, some schools put up countdown boards in the classrooms and every day before the first class in the morning or afternoon teachers shout encouraging slogans together with their students

   Some people are in favour of these measures, saying that they will keep up the students’ fighting spirits and help them achieve success in their final exams. Others think differently. They believe students can only perform their best when they are not stressful.

    As a Senior 3 student, I understand why schools and parents behave the ways they do, but the more you hurry, the less process you are likely to make. Only by being happy and confident can we eventually work miracles.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇議論文。文章給出了簡單的漢語提示，這要求考生成文時要充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力。將文章內(nèi)容自然的表達出來。成文時應注意以下幾點：1.采用三段成文法：（1）敘述現(xiàn)象；（2）文章的重點，正反雙方的觀點；（3）發(fā)表我的看法。2.時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；3.人稱：第三人稱；4.恰當使用高級詞匯、短語和句型，提高文章的檔次；5.適當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章表達自然、流暢。

考點：考查學生的語言運用能力。

【范文亮點】使用了非謂語動詞短語作狀語：saying that they will keep up the students’ fighting spirits and help them achieve success in their final exams. 使用了倒裝句：Only by being happy and confident can we eventually work miracles.使用了從句：I understand why schools and parents behave the ways they do，They believe students can only perform their best when they are not stressful.  短語：be in favour of ；keep up