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20．假設(shè)你的美國朋友Jack最近因考試成績不理想而感到沮喪甚至想放棄學(xué)習(xí)，請(qǐng)你些一封信給他，要求如下
1．表示安慰
2．給出建議
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Dear Jack，
I learnt from your last letter thatyou're feeling upset recently because you haven't performed well in the exams and that you even want to give up studying．（高分句型一）
It is natural to feel upset after exams if we don't perform well enought．To solve this problem，Ithink it is important to develop the right attitude towards exams．After all，they are only a means of checking how we are getting on with our lessons，so there is no need tocare too much about grades．（高分句型二）The most importantthing is to analyze the cause of the failure and look for the proper solutions．
Remember that failure can be a learning experience and an opportunity for a fresh start．高分句型三）
Best wishes
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息美國朋友Jack最近因考試成績不理想而感到沮喪甚至想放棄學(xué)習(xí)，請(qǐng)你些一封信給他，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：表示安慰；給出建議 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：feel upset感到沮喪；give up 放棄；After all畢竟；get on with與…相處；look for 尋找
 I learnt from your last letter that you're feeling upset recently because you haven't performed well in the exams and that you even want to give up studying．（高分句型一）
After all，they are only a means of checking how we are getting on with our lessons，so there is no need to care too much about grades．（高分句型二）
Remember that failure can be a learning experience and an opportunity for a fresh start．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
       I learnt from your last letter that you're feeling upset recently because you haven't performed well in the exams and that you even want to give up studying．（高分句型一）
      It is natural to feel upset after exams if we don't perform well enought．To solve this problem，I think it is important to develop the right attitude towards exams．After all，they are only a means of checking how we are getting on with our lessons，so there is no need to care too much about grades．（高分句型二）The most important thing is to analyze the cause of the failure and look for the proper solutions．
      Remember that failure can be a learning experience and an opportunity for a fresh start．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Best wishes
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．