基礎(chǔ)寫作(15分)

假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你使用5個(gè)句子就本校食堂服務(wù)(canteen service)的狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信。開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

內(nèi)容包括:

優(yōu)點(diǎn)

不足

建議

食堂干凈

價(jià)格偏高

希望學(xué)校盡快解決問(wèn)題

飯菜可口

種類偏少

服務(wù)態(tài)度好

等候時(shí)間較長(zhǎng)

Dear Mr. Principal.

I am a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Dear Mr. Principal,

I am a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.

In general, the service is satisfactory. The hall is clean and tidy and the dishes taste delicious as well. What's more, the workers there treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy.

However, we feel the price of the meals is a little too high, Besides, we can only have a limited variety of dishes with little change every week. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time is to us students. Therefore, may I suggest something be done to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?

Thanks for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前,一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn),理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累,寫作聯(lián)系以外,還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文,這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語(yǔ)In general一般來(lái)說(shuō);What's more而且;In addition此外;You could understand how precious time is to us students.這個(gè)句子how引導(dǎo)understand的賓語(yǔ)從句;Therefore, may I suggest something be done to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school這個(gè)句子中suggest做建議講,賓語(yǔ)從句用(should)do;

考點(diǎn): 提綱類作文

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