Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
 
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a
Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop.
30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

Answer 1

【小題1】great前的of 去掉
【小題2】minute→minutes
【小題3】and→but
【小題4】with→on
【小題5】when→than
【小題6】waited前加had
【小題7】other→another
【小題8】do→did
【小題9】possible→possibly
【小題10】lose→losing

解析試題分析：
【小題1】Patience is of a great importance in our daily life.。importance 為抽象名詞，前面不可用冠詞，所以a 去掉。
【小題2】30 minute had passed,。minute是可數(shù)名詞，前面又有30，所以應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。minute改為minutes。
【小題3】30 minute had passed, and no bus came.。等了30分鐘，但是沒有汽車來。應(yīng)該是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。and改為but。
【小題4】I decided to walk with foot.。固定短語on foot，所以 with 改為 on。
【小題5】But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.。固定句型no sooner…than，所以when改為than。
【小題6】I thought if I waited for one more minute。waited 動作應(yīng)發(fā)生在動詞thought之前，所以應(yīng)該用過去完成時，waited 前面加had。
【小題7】I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes.“再30分鐘，又30分鐘”應(yīng)該是another 30 minutes，所以other改為another。
【小題8】Only then do I realize my problem. 事情發(fā)生在過去，所以 do改為did。
【小題9】Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in.修飾動詞應(yīng)該用副詞，所以possible改為possibly。
【小題10】Now whenever I am close to lose my patience. be close to 短語中to 是介詞所以lose改為losing。
考點(diǎn)：短文改錯，考查發(fā)現(xiàn)和改正錯誤的能力。