Question

書面表達(dá)（總分15分）
某英文報紙正在舉行“我難忘的一次經(jīng)歷”主題征文比賽。假設(shè)你曾參加過全校大合唱比賽。請你以“An unforgettable experience”為題，根據(jù)下表提示，用英語寫一篇短文，準(zhǔn)備投稿。

Activity	a group singing competition
Preparation	…
Result	win the first prize
Your feelings	e. g. No pains, no gains.

注意：
（1）短文須包括上述要點，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等個人信息；
（3）詞數(shù)：100左右。開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
An unforgettable experience
During the past year at high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences.  One of them was                                                                                                                                                                                     

Answer 1

One possible version:
An unforgettable experience
During the past year at high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of them was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. In order to win the competition, we went all out for it. During the week before the competition, we practiced singing in our free time. Although it was a hard job, every participant took it seriously and did their best. Thanks to our efforts, we won the first prize. Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy. The moment we got the prize, an old saying hit my mind — No pains, no gains. It was hard work, but during the course of preparation, we developed friendship, confidence as well as understanding.

解析根據(jù)題目要求和表格，要表達(dá)的要點有：1.參加了大合唱活動， 2.前期的準(zhǔn)備活動
2.獲得一等獎 3.自我感受。范文雖然只有100子左右，但是里面不乏亮點，其中有一些高級別的單詞和詞組，例如： go all out for全力以赴,  participants參與者, take it seriously認(rèn)真對待它, thanks to our efforts由于我們的努力 ,wild with joy高興的瘋了, 還有一精彩的句子，如：hearing the exciting news,…….  The moment we got the prize,…an old saying hit my mind….我想到了一句俗語。另外文章的關(guān)聯(lián)也很自然，比方說最后一句用as well as 很好的把句子串聯(lián)了起來。所以在書面表達(dá)中，不能逐字逐句的翻譯，應(yīng)該熟練的運用所學(xué)的語法和詞匯，并