Question

根據(jù)下面提示用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文，標題為：Have a healthy lifestyle
內容如下:
（1）許多青少年不注重健康問題的現(xiàn)象及導致的危害；
（2）簡述你的看法，提出你的建議。
Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.     
                                                                                       
                                                                                       

Answer 1

Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.
However, many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. First, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.
In my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer. Go out to take some exercises, play some sports and visit some friends and have a healthy lifestyle.

解析試題分析：這篇書面表達是半開放性作文，給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】范文以要點為基礎，又不拘泥于要點，有適當?shù)耐卣梗�還使用了詞組和句型：pay attention to注意，have a bad effect on對…有壞的影響， Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.這句話用了倒裝句， And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.這兩句話用了非限制性定語從句，
還有文章使用了First, Besides, Thirdly,這樣的關聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。
考點：考查半開放式書面表達