請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一封回信。(30分) 字?jǐn)?shù)：100-120個(gè)單詞

Dear Miss Wang , I am a student from Huzhou Senior High School . I have a problem . I’m not good at English . But I do want to change the situation . I hope that you can give me some advice on how to improve my English .

Yours

Xiao dong

Dear Xiao dong,

I'm very sorry that you have difficulty in learning English. However , the situation is easy to change if you take my advice . Here are some tips for you to follow.

Firstly, it is very useful for you to go over the words and expressions regularly. If you do this, you can use them freely whenever you want to .Secondly, I find it essential for you to listen to your teacher carefully and ask him if you have any trouble. By doing this, you will make much progress, and at the same time your teacher can give your more help. Thirdly, you'd better practise English with your classmates as often as possible. It's a good way to improve your speaking skills. Finally, I suggest that you should watch more English movies and listen to more English songs. That way , you will become more interested in it .

As long as you take my advice, I am sure you will have a good command of English soon

Yours

Xiao dong

【解析】

試題分析：考察寫信函的格式，給出建議的語(yǔ)氣，邏輯思維是否清晰。首先表達(dá)對(duì)別人問(wèn)題的看法，最終的部分是建議，最后部分建議信函的萬(wàn)能格式；只要你采取我的建議，一定會(huì)有所提高，英語(yǔ)一定可以提高。第二段是這篇作文的關(guān)鍵，條理清晰的給出幾點(diǎn)建議是主要考點(diǎn)，通過(guò)這一段的敘述可以看出考生的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。特別要注意信函給當(dāng)事人出意見(jiàn)應(yīng)該用第二人稱。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：本文條例清晰，首先第一段對(duì)別人的問(wèn)題感到抱歉，抱歉之后安慰別人，這些都可以改變的，如果你能聽(tīng)從我的建議。第二段給出自己的四個(gè)建議，第三段是對(duì)建議的總結(jié)也是對(duì)別人的祝愿。這樣的三段式是很典型的提意見(jiàn)的風(fēng)格，我們重點(diǎn)賞析第二段，這里用了Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly是作者給點(diǎn)建議更有條理。it is very useful for you to，I find it essential for you to，By，It's a good way to，you'd better. I suggest that sb (should) do sth這些亮點(diǎn)句式給文章添彩，而且會(huì)是語(yǔ)氣更為委婉。 have a difficulty in doing sth , as often as possible,by doing this，As long as,亮點(diǎn)詞組，讓閱卷人瞬間起加分效果。

考點(diǎn)：考察信函類書寫

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