Question

14．假定你是李華．在即將到來的暑假，你與朋友們計劃在社區(qū)開辦一個英語角（English Corner），方便英語愛好者交流練習(xí)．請你寫一封信，邀請感興趣的居民前來參加．內(nèi)容包括：
1．開辦目的；
2．時間：每周五下午3：00-5：00，地點：the Violet Café；
3．交流內(nèi)容．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear all，
Are you an English learner who'd love to communicate with others in the language and to practise what you've learnt in class？（高分句型一）Good news for you!Our English Corner to be held this summer will certainly provide you with a rare opportunity to use the language in your daily life!（高分句型二）
Every Friday afternoon，from 3：00 to 5：00，you're more than welcome to the Violet Caféto join in our chats．A wide range of topics will be covered，including school life，sports and games．Topics may rotate and conversations will flow．If you're shy as a new comer，you don't need to feel the least bit of pressure to speak up．（高分句型三）Your presence alone will be a good learning experience．
Come and join us!We're looking forward to your participation!
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華．在即將到來的暑假，你與朋友們計劃在社區(qū)開辦一個英語角（English Corner），方便英語愛好者交流練習(xí)．請你寫一封信，邀請感興趣的居民前來參加，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：開辦目的；時間：每周五下午3：00-5：00，地點：the Violet Café；交流內(nèi)容．  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：communicate with與…交流；in your daily life在日常生活中；more than 非常；join in參加；including包括；look forward to 盼望；
 Are you an English learner who'd love to communicate with others in the language and to practise what you've learnt in class？（高分句型一）
Our English Corner to be held this summer will certainly provide you with a rare opportunity to use the language in your daily life!（高分句型二）
If you're shy as a new comer，you don't need to feel the least bit of pressure to speak up．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear all，
      Are you an English learner who'd love to communicate with others in the language and to practise what you've learnt in class？（高分句型一）Good news for you!Our English Corner to be held this summer will certainly provide you with a rare opportunity to use the language in your daily life!（高分句型二）
      Every Friday afternoon，from 3：00 to 5：00，you're more than welcome to the Violet Café to join in our chats．A wide range of topics will be covered，including school life，sports and games．Topics may rotate and conversations will flow．If you're shy as a new comer，you don't need to feel the least bit of pressure to speak up．（高分句型三）Your presence alone will be a good learning experience．
      Come and join us!We're looking forward to your participation!
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．