Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老師家做客，但是她不知道中國人做客有哪些傳統(tǒng)，她給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，請你給她一些建議。請你依據(jù)下列要點，給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件。

要點如下：

1.適當(dāng)?shù)厮鸵恍┒Y物；

2.介紹中國的餐桌禮儀。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Lucy,

I have received your email.You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China._____________

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I do hope you will enjoy yourself ill your teacher's home.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I have received your email.You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China.Here are some suggestions received by most Chinese.

Firstly,when you visit a Chinese family,you'd better bring some gifts.In China,it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand.So,you can buy some fresh fruits or a box of milk.What's more,table manners are also of great importance.We Chinese like to treat our guests with many delicious dishes.When at table,you should not begin eating first,but follow the host or the senior one.Sometimes,the host will help you with some dishes, which is different from western traditions,and you should show your appreciation.

All in all,just as the old saying goes,"When in Rome,do as Romans do."

I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher's home.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇是一篇提綱作文。

提綱作文，要求考生根據(jù)所給的提示性文字。首先確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想開展。表達(dá)主旨。緊緊地圍繞中心思想展開論述，表達(dá)主旨。但它的限定性較大。我們根據(jù)大綱來完成對一個指定事項的說明或者辯論，多以說明文和議論文為主。當(dāng)然，也不排除一部分文章會出現(xiàn)記敘文。

對于這類文章，審題是關(guān)鍵，涵蓋重點，使用名種句型，使用高級詞匯和句型這類作文我們的邏輯路徑通常是這樣的

1、仔細(xì)審題，確定主題和文體。然后確定文章的主題、大致內(nèi)容及文體。

2、總結(jié)要點，以每一個要點作為一個段落展開，不能偏離也不能任意增刪。

3、提綱是對文章的提示和概括，考生要根據(jù)提綱的性質(zhì)。盡可能地使用復(fù)雜句，多種句子結(jié)構(gòu)，高組詞匯

4、認(rèn)真檢查，注意格式和書寫

本篇作文的亮點：本篇作文層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，目的明確，表達(dá)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)；能熟練地使用復(fù)雜句，多種復(fù)合句式使文章主題明確，意義完整。例如：

復(fù)雜句：Sometimes, the host will help you with some dishes, which is different from western traditions, and you should show your appreciation.

動詞不定式作賓語：You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China.

狀語從句：when you visit a Chinese family, you'd better bring some gifts

定語從句1：…the host will help you with some dishes, which is different from western traditions。

定語從句2：…as the old saying goes, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.”

并列句：…which is different from western traditions, and you should show your appreciation.

運用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞firstly，what’s more, all in all。

省略：When（you’re） at table, you should not begin eating first, but follow the host or the senior one.

強調(diào)句式：I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher’s home.

諺語：When in Rome, do as Romans do.