Question

13．假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國新近出現(xiàn)的一種共享單車"mobike"很感興趣，并請你做個簡要介紹．請你給Jim回信，內容包括：
1．共享單車的使用方法（如：下載APP查看車輛、掃二維碼開鎖等）；
2．共享單車的優(yōu)勢；
3．你對共享單車的看法．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：共享單車sharing bike    掃二維碼 scan the QR code．
Dear Jim，
I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter．
It's very convenient to use if you have a mobile phone．What you do is to find anearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip．
Compared toother forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trendas a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressureand does good to the environment as well．
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip．
要做的是通過APP找到最近MOBIKE、掃描QR碼在自行車上，享受您的旅行．
高分句型二：
It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well．
它正成為一種新的趨勢，作為一種交通工具，從而緩解交通壓力，有利于環(huán)境

解答 Dear Jim，
I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter．
It's very convenient to use if you have a mobile phone．What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip（高分句型一）．
Compared to other forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well（高分句型二）．
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．