Question

根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇《財(cái)富與快樂(lè)》的短文。
（1）一些人認(rèn)為財(cái)富能帶來(lái)快樂(lè)。
（2）另一些人認(rèn)為錢多了不是一件好事。
（3）提出自己的看法。
注意：?jiǎn)卧~數(shù)120個(gè)左右。
Wealth and Happiness
Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them.                         
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. They work hard and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased. Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。But some people believe wealth can’t bring them happiness. For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing. What a terrible result!
In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society. If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remember： money is not everything

試題分析：這是一篇議論文，文章是討論財(cái)富與快樂(lè)的關(guān)系，這種文章一般層次比較清晰，有總述、正方和反方的論述，以及自己觀點(diǎn)。有難度的是，這篇文章只是給了提綱，沒(méi)有具體的要點(diǎn)，要求在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思。考生應(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力�？忌鷳�(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語(yǔ)及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. 這句話是it做形式主語(yǔ)， After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased.這句話用了動(dòng)名詞， when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. 這句話有時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. 這句話里面用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，
I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society這句話用了固定句型：There is no doubt that…...。