Question

假如你校和加拿大某中學(xué)是友好學(xué)校，對(duì)方校刊來(lái)信了解你校的選修課開(kāi)設(shè)情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，向?qū)Ψ浇榻B這一情況。(選修課optional course) （ 120詞左右）

課程門(mén)類	上課時(shí)間	學(xué)生對(duì)課程的看法	學(xué)生建議
六種：書(shū)法、英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)、音樂(lè)欣賞、電影欣賞、攝影和游泳，學(xué)生可任選	每周二、五下午 4：30～6：00	很有趣；能學(xué)到許多課外知識(shí)；有實(shí)踐機(jī)會(huì) … …	增加選修課；減少作業(yè)量；多組織參觀、了解社會(huì)的活動(dòng) … …

Answer 1

This term our school is offering six optional courses for students to choose from. The courses include Handwriting, Spoken English, Music Appreciation, Movie Appreciation, Photographing and Swimming. They are given from 4:30 pm to 6:00 pm on Tuesday and Friday.
Students take great interest in the optional courses. They say they have learned a lot that can’t be learned in the textbooks. At the same time, many chances have been given to them to practice what they have learned in class. Therefore, the students hope more optional courses will be offered in the future and that more trips and visits will be organized so that they can learn more about what is going on outside the school.

試題分析：這是一篇表格類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，結(jié)合具體內(nèi)容要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。象many chances have been given to them to practice what they have learned in class.這是what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是時(shí)間的表達(dá)法。from 4:30 pm to 6:00 pm on Tuesday and Friday.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于表格類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。