Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
VII. Proof —reading
Mike called his wife to tell him that he had got two film tickets. He asked her to go and meet him outside the theatre. Mike’s wife is very glad because they hadn’t seen a film for quite long time. She met her husband in the entrance to the cinema. Mike took out his wallet to get the tickets, so they were not there. He then tried his pockets, but the tickets were not there, too. Mike looked very worrying. “What’s the matter?” asked his wife. “Well,” Mike explained, “I remember that I did with them. I put it on the desk and forgot to pick them up before leaving for the office!”

Answer 1

【小題1】him—her
【小題2】is—was
【小題3】quite a long time
【小題4】in—at
【小題5】so—but
【小題6】too—either
【小題7】worrying—worried
【小題8】that—what
【小題9】it—them
【小題10】for去掉

解析試題分析：邁克給妻子打電話說他有兩張電影票，讓她去電影院外等他。因為很長時間沒看電影了，于是他妻子就高高興興去了。但是當(dāng)?shù)搅穗娪霸洪T口的時候，邁克卻怎么也找不到電影票了，原來他把票落到辦公室的桌子上了。
【小題1】考查代詞用法。 Mike called his wife to tell him 邁克給妻子打電話，所以應(yīng)該是告訴她事情，所以把him改為her。
【小題2】考查動詞時態(tài)。Mike’s wife is very glad 根據(jù)語境判斷短文是敘述過去的事情，所以把is改為was。
【小題3】考查冠詞用法。they hadn’t seen a film for quite long time.固定短語quite a long time“相當(dāng)長的時間”，所以long前面加a。
【小題4】考查介詞用法。 She met her husband in the entrance to the cinema 在入口處應(yīng)該用介詞at，所以把in改為at。
【小題5】考查連詞用法。 so they were not there.根據(jù)語境可知前后兩句話是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以把so改為but。【小題6】考查副詞用法。 but the tickets were not there, too.根據(jù)詞的用法可知，too用在肯定句末尾，而在否定句中表示“也不”，要用either，所以把 too改為either。
【小題7】考查形容詞用法。Mike looked very worrying.此處表達Mike的心情，要用—ed結(jié)尾的形容詞，把worrying改為worried。
【小題8】考查連接詞。I remember that I did with them 從結(jié)構(gòu)可知remember后是賓語從句，that引導(dǎo)賓語從句時不做成分，而動詞did缺少主語，所以把that改為what。
【小題9】考查代詞用法。 I put it on the desk 根據(jù)上文可知他們拿到的是兩張票，所以把it改為them。
【小題10】考查動詞短語。 before leaving for the office . leave for sp“動身去某地”而此處指的是離開辦公室之前，所以去掉介詞for。
考點：考查短文改錯。