【題目】

你的美國(guó)筆友Lucy來(lái)信說(shuō)她最近學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)重，常常感到疲憊。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給Lucy寫(xiě)回信。

1．調(diào)整學(xué)習(xí)方法；

2．積極鍛煉；

3．其它建議。

注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Lucy，

J learned about your trouble from, your mail．Don’t worry．

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【答案】

【解析】本文是應(yīng)用文，要求學(xué)生就Lucy學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)重的問(wèn)題給她寫(xiě)回信，故應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第二人稱(chēng)。

文章的時(shí)態(tài)使用得當(dāng)，概括文章所要求的全部要點(diǎn)，足見(jiàn)作者語(yǔ)言功底。文中使用了不定式to deal with作定語(yǔ)；doing sports短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)；兩次使用動(dòng)詞ing形式作like的賓語(yǔ)；還有besides，and，but，so等連詞的應(yīng)用文章一氣呵成。該文章能夠有效地使用語(yǔ)句之間的連接成分，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的，堪稱(chēng)佳作。

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