Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請?jiān)谟绣e誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：
1. 每句不超過兩個錯誤；
2. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
3. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
My mother is a village woman, who is already in fifties.She has very little education, and she knows knowledge is of very importance to young people. She often asked me how I get along with my studies and encourages me study hard. My mother does everything she can for me so that I can spend more time on my study. Once she was bad ill and had stayed in bed
for several days. When I got home, I found the light was still off and mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! I was so deeply moved that tear came to my eyes. So is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman.

Answer 1

【小題1】in fifties – in her fifties
【小題2】and改成 but
【小題3】very改成great
【小題4】ask改成asked
【小題5】study改成to study
【小題6】bad ill – badly ill
【小題7】off改成on
【小題8】made改成making
【小題9】tear 改成 tears
【小題10】so 改成such

解析試題分析：文章介紹了作者的媽媽，接受過很少的教育，但是她知道知識對年輕人很重要，經(jīng)常鼓勵作者努力學(xué)習(xí)，自己也是很善良和勤奮的女性。
【小題1】句意：媽媽已經(jīng)50幾歲了。In one’s fifties 在某人幾十歲的時(shí)候
【小題2】句意：她接受過很少的教育，但是她知道知識對年輕人很重要。and改成 but
【小題3】very是副詞，應(yīng)該修飾形容詞或副詞，importance是名詞，用 great修飾
【小題4】這句話時(shí)間狀語是often，用的是一般過去式，
【小題5】媽媽鼓勵我努力學(xué)習(xí)。Encourage sb to do sth，study改成to study
【小題6】有一次她病的很厲害，不得不臥床幾天。用副詞badly 修飾ill
【小題7】當(dāng)我回家的時(shí)候，看見燈還亮著。On是副詞，“開著”
【小題8】媽媽坐在床上，為我做新衣服。用現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語：made改成making
【小題9】我感動的流淚了。tear 表示“眼淚”用復(fù)數(shù) tears
【小題10】這就是我媽媽一個善良的勤奮的女性。 Such做代詞，指代“這種情況”，
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯