Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（A )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\ )劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（---），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

Answer 1

【小題1】visit-visited
【小題2】but-so/and
【小題3】to去掉
【小題4】comfortably-comfortable
【小題5】were-was
【小題6】for –with
【小題7】taking-taken
【小題8】dish-dishes
【小題9】such ∧great-a
【小題10】me-mine

解析【小題1】根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)last month可知本句時(shí)態(tài)是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故動(dòng)詞用過(guò)去式。
【小題2】前后文是順延或因果關(guān)系，故連詞用and或so。
【小題3】anywhere是指地點(diǎn)的副詞，其前不用介詞。
【小題4】修飾名詞room，應(yīng)用形容詞。
【小題5】what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句做主語(yǔ)，其意思是單數(shù)，故系動(dòng)詞were改為was。
【小題6】動(dòng)詞share常與介詞with構(gòu)成搭配，意思是：和某人分享。
【小題7】非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作后置定語(yǔ)，與所修飾詞是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用過(guò)去分詞。
【小題8】由several修飾，名詞應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。
【小題9】hotel是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，第一次提到，前需加不定冠詞。
【小題10】雙重所有格的構(gòu)成是of +名詞性物主代詞或名詞所有格。