Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(^)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2．只允許修改10處

Recently I have read an article in a magazine. It was about the mother who was worried about her son just because of he always kept his hair long. The mother thought that was not right, but the son felt there was nothing unusually about it. Different generations have different opinion on the same thing. That is what is meaning by "the generation gap". We can see them in our daily lives. Most of our parents like listening to old songs when young people prefer pop songs. Every time my father finds me listen to rock music, he always shouted, "Shut it off. It's awful!" How can we deal the generation gap?

Answer 1

1.the 改為 a mother

2.because of去掉of

3.unusually 改為unusual

4.opinion改為opinions

5.meaning改成meant

6.we can see them改成it

7.when改成while

8.listen改成listening

9.shouted改成shouts

10.deal 后面加with

【解析】

1.1】.此處是泛指，表示“關(guān)于一個(gè)媽媽”，故把 the 改為 a mother。

2.2】because of 后面不能跟完整的句子，he always kept his hair long 是一個(gè)完整的句子，故because of去掉of。此處是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。

3.3】nothing是不定代詞，形容詞修飾不定代詞，且放在不定代詞后面，故把 unusually 改為unusual。

4.4】此處表達(dá)的是不同的觀點(diǎn)，所以opinion要用復(fù)數(shù)，故把opinion改為opinions。

5.5】固定搭配what is meant by…這個(gè)的意思是指...，故把meaning改成meant。

6.6】“在日常生活中我們也能看到它”，這里的它指"the generation gap"，故把we can see them改成it。

7.7】此處不是時(shí)間狀語從句而是一個(gè)并列句，表示前后形成鮮明對比，“然而”，故把when改成while。

8.8】“每次我父親發(fā)現(xiàn)我聽搖滾樂時(shí)”，此處表示正在聽，用現(xiàn)在分詞作賓語補(bǔ)足語，故把listen改成listening.

9.9】“每次我父親發(fā)現(xiàn)我聽搖滾樂時(shí)，他都沖著我大聲喊”，此處表達(dá)的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，故把shouted改成shouts。

10.10】考查固定搭配�！拔覀冊鯓犹幚磉@代溝”?故deal 后面加with。deal with處理

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯。