Question

10．假如你是李華．校英文報Growing pains欄目專門解答中學生的煩惱問題．現(xiàn)欄目收到一封來信．請根據(jù)這封信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信．
Dear Editor，
I am really angry with my parents recently．Next Sunday is my birthday．My parents promised to buy a cell phone for me as my birthday present this year．But now when I ask about the birthday present they say they have changed their ideas，because they worry about my study if I get a new cell phone since the final exam is coming soon．They say a cell phone may take up too much of my time．I believe I am old enough to control myself，but they don't believe me．What's more，they broke their promise!
Li Yan
內(nèi)容要求：
1．理解父母良苦用心；
2．手機有利有弊；
3．給出你的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾已寫好．
Dear Li Yan，
It's normal to have these feelings．
As a saying says，to be appreciated as a parents is quite unusual．It is quit sure that parents are willing to do theirbest to give us as possible as they can．We should understandthe good intentions of parents．They must have been for your own good．As a high school student，our studies are important and very heavy．There are many advantages of mobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checkinginformation and so on．But there is also a lot of harm，such as improper use，indeed affect the study and life．We should try our best to study and make great progress．
I hope things will be better for you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
It is quit sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can
很肯定，家長們都愿意盡自己最大的努力給我們盡可能好的東西．
高分句型二：
There are many advantages of mobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checking information and so on．
手機有很多優(yōu)點如檢字典，聽音樂，查資料等等．

解答 Dear Li Yan，
   It's normal to have these feelings．As a saying says，to be appreciated as a parents is quite unusual．It is quit sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can（高分句型一）．We should understand the good intentions of parents．They must have been for your own good．As a high school student，our studies are important and very heavy．There are many advantages of mobile phone，checking dictionaries，listening to music，checking information and so on（高分句型二）．But there is also a lot of harm，such as improper use，indeed affect the study and life．We should try our best to study and make great progress．
I hope things will be better for you soon!
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．