Question

假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生會主席李華，最近學(xué)生忙于學(xué)習(xí)，疏于鍛煉，體質(zhì)下降，容易感冒，結(jié)合實際，寫一份“號召鍛煉”的倡議書，內(nèi)容如下：

1. 現(xiàn)狀分析；

2. 倡導(dǎo)鍛煉。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢。

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Answer 1

Recently, a large number of students devote all their time to studies and spend little time in exercising. As a result, some students are not healthy and often suffer from colds, which affects their studies and health.

As the old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” At school, we need to keep the balance between work and exercise, otherwise if we work too much, we cannot work efficiently. Therefore, we should pay more attention to exercising. It is suggested that we should take enough exercise —half an hour each day. Only in this way can we keep energy and achieve a better result. Let’s take exercise every day from today on!

【解析】

試題分析：對于寫類似倡議書這樣的文章，先要列出現(xiàn)狀，指出這些現(xiàn)狀帶來的不良影響，然后提出改變這些現(xiàn)狀的迫切性及相應(yīng)的對策，應(yīng)題目要求，可采取兩段式，先分析現(xiàn)狀，然后提出建議。注意文中所給的信息，不可遺漏，可以多進行一些補充，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。

【亮點說明】第一，結(jié)構(gòu)上清晰明了，嚴謹簡潔；內(nèi)容上符合題意。第二，詞組、句式及諺語的靈活運用，例如devote sth to sth、suffer from；文章涉及到限制性定語從句，例如第一段的最后一句“As a result, some students are not healthy and often suffer from colds, which affects their studies and health.”；倒裝句，例如第二段的倒數(shù)第二句“Only in this way can we keep energy and achieve a better result.”；條件句，例如第二段的第二句“if we work too much, we cannot work efficiently. ”；主語從句，例如第二段的倒數(shù)第三句“It is suggested that we should take enough exercise —half an hour each day.”；在第二段中就運用了一個通俗的諺語“聰明的小孩也變傻”來強調(diào)學(xué)與玩之間要平衡的重要性。這些的靈活運用，使文章更有水平，為文章增加了不少色彩，并吸引讀者的興趣，減少此類文章的乏味性。

考點：考查對材料性作文的寫作