Question

4．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞．
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第II處起）不計(jì)分．
One cold evening during the holiday season，a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window． The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags． A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes． She took the child by the hand and led him into the store． There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing．They came back outside into the street，so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday． The little boy looked  her and asked how she was God． She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child．

Answer 1

分析 假日一個(gè)寒冷的夜晚，一個(gè)大約六七歲的小男孩站在商場(chǎng)的櫥窗前，沒(méi)穿鞋子，衣服破破爛爛．經(jīng)過(guò)的一位女士看到了孩子蒼白的藍(lán)眼睛中的渴望．她帶著小男孩加入商場(chǎng)，給他買(mǎi)了新鞋子和溫暖的衣服．出了商場(chǎng)，這位女士讓小男孩回家，小男孩看著她，問(wèn)她是否是上帝，女士笑著說(shuō)她只是上帝的一個(gè)孩子．

解答 One cold evening during the holiday season，a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window．
                                                                                                                                          去掉  
The little child hasno shoes and his clothes were just rags．
                      had
A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes．
                        passing 
She took the child by the hand and led him into the store． There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing．
                                                                                                                 him                                                         warm
They came back outside into the street，so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday． 
                                                           and                                         go                                       
The little boy looked∧her and asked how she was God．
                              加at                  if/whether
She smiled and replied that she was just one of his child．
                                                                         children
1．the去掉．短語(yǔ)搭配，in the front of是指內(nèi)部的前部，in front of 是外部的前面．
2．has改為had．文章講述的是過(guò)去的故事，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
3．passes改為passing．題干中pass by是作woman的后置定語(yǔ)，要用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式．兩者構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，要用現(xiàn)在分詞．
4．her改為him．邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤，句意指代的是小男孩，要用him來(lái)指代．
5．warmly改為warm．題干中是修飾名詞clothing，要用形容詞．
6．so改為and．句意表達(dá)的是承接的動(dòng)作，不是結(jié)果．
7．come改為go．邏輯錯(cuò)誤，句意表達(dá)的是讓小男孩回家去，不是到家來(lái)．
8．加at．題干中l(wèi)ook是不及物動(dòng)詞，后接賓語(yǔ)時(shí)，要加介詞．
9．how改為if/whether．題干中she was God是作asked的賓語(yǔ)從句，句意表達(dá)的是小男孩問(wèn)她是不是上帝，不是表達(dá)程度．
10．child改為children．題干中前面有one of短語(yǔ)，child要用復(fù)數(shù)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．