Question

假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在正參加一場英語演講比賽，你抽到的題目是“Smile for life, and every day will be sunshine”.請你就該話題展開演講。你的演講必須包含以下三個方面的內(nèi)容：
你對此話的理解；  
2. 用一個事例來支持你的觀點；   
3. 總結(jié)發(fā)言。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：1 20左右；
2．文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。
Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s my honor to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for life, and every day will be sunshine.”              _________________________________        ___     
             _________________________________        ___                       
                                                                                            
                                             
                                                                                 
                                                                                      
Thanks for your attention.   

Answer 1

Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s my honor to give a speech here. My topic of speech is ”Smile for life, and every day  will be sunshine” It conveys the message that positive attitude really counts in our life. Once we adopt a positive attitude towards life, we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way, realize our dreams and gain success. 
Here I share one experience with you. With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, I was filled with great anxiety. Under great pressure, I couldn’t applying myself to study, resulting in failing in the examination. I got very frustrated. Just then ,my head teacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and said “In life we all have moments when we can’t achieve what we want. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you, but turn them into motivation to inspire you.” Her words were a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life. Consequently, I gained what I deserved .
So from the story, it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to confront tough difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.
Thanks for your attention!

解析試題分析：本篇書面表達要求寫一篇題為“Smile for life, and every day will be sunshine”的演講稿。內(nèi)容要求包括三個方面，所以在結(jié)構(gòu)安排上可以采用三段式，來分別介紹三方面的內(nèi)容。此外，為了充實文章內(nèi)容，可以充分發(fā)揮想象力，適當增加細節(jié)。在語言方面，因為本文要求寫的是演講稿所以語言要有感染力，而且還要注意連接詞的正確運用，以使文章內(nèi)容連貫，語言自然流暢。
【亮點說明】本篇范文在內(nèi)容形式上都符合演講稿的要求，而且三段式的段落安排也使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了。文中高級詞匯adopt、Consequently、approach、drawing near的使用顯示了作者對詞匯的準確把握能力。而強調(diào)句it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all.，狀語從句Once we adopt a positive attitude towards life,定語從句which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life和短語With the College Entrance Examination drawing near、Just then等多變的句式也顯示了作者深厚的語言功底，是文章的一大亮點。此外，作者以自身的經(jīng)歷為例更增添了文章的親和力和感召力�？傊�，這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的范文。
考點：考查提綱作文。