Question

最近，我們以“2012年中學生的春節(jié)活動”為題，在368名中學生中進行了一次調(diào)查（survey）。以下是調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)：

【寫作內(nèi)容】
請根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容用英語寫一份調(diào)查報告。內(nèi)容包括：
1.調(diào)查問題及調(diào)查對象；
2.主要活動；
3.感受及原因；
4.期望。
【寫作要求】
1.只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
句子結構準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結構連貫。

Answer 1

Recently we surveyed 368 middle school students on how they spent the 2012 Spring Festival. 30% said they spent most of their time with their parents visiting relatives and friends while 25% went traveling with classmates or parents. 45% of all those surveyed indicated that they just stayed at home to do homework. When asked how they felt about the Spring Festival, most said they enjoyed it because of the holiday and lucky money they got, but some felt unhappy because the amount of homework they were given left little time for fun activities. Many students expressed the hope that next year they will have less homework and more free time.

解析寫作前首先要看清楚要求，題目要求寫“2012年中學生的春節(jié)活動”的調(diào)查,信息有餅狀圖表和文字說明，而且內(nèi)容包括: 1.調(diào)查問題及調(diào)查對象；2.主要活動；3.感受及原因；4.期望，首先要會看圖表，這是一個餅狀圖表，主要顯示的是不同的活動比例，寫作時要交代清楚，題目要求只能寫五句話，因此在寫文章時一定會遇到長的句子，一定需要把握長句的能力，掌握主從句的靈活運用。例如第一句話中的how they spent the 2012 Spring Festival.是賓語從句。第二句話的復合結構with their parents visiting relatives and friends和while 25% went traveling with classmates or parents.。第三句話的45% of all those surveyed 這里surveyed作定語修飾those。第四句話最長，使用了When asked how they felt about the Spring Festival,狀語從句的省略式，because of the holiday and lucky money they got,這里面包含了定語從句，because the amount of homework they were given left little time for fun activities.在這個原因狀語從句中也有定語從句。最后一句話里Many students expressed the hope that next year they will have less homework and more free time.that引導的就是同位語從句。有這些精彩的句子組合的文章才能出彩。