Question

假定你是李明，你的澳大利亞朋友Steven給你來信向你咨詢如何才能學好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點給他回信提出建議。
要點：
參加中文學習班；看中文書刊電視；學唱中文歌曲；交中國朋友。
注意：
文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
詞數(shù)：120左右。
Dear Steven,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
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Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Steven,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are my suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write to me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，但不是很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。還要考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用時態(tài)，人稱，單詞拼寫，主謂一致等問題，也可以使用一些高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些句型： it is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. 這句話用了it做形式主語， it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. 這句話用了狀語從句的省略，還有文章使用了First, Then, Besides這樣的關聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
考點: 考查提綱類書面表達